Finally caught it.
I agree with many of you: over-all, there is some charming stuff there, though they have quite a bit of work to do before it's NY-ready.
Being an out-of-town try-out and world premiere, I can't imagine the creative team doesn't have a list twice as long as mine, waiting until they can put changes in.
Some of my thoughts (tons of SPOILERS):
-OPENING NUMBER: Cut and swap. Absolutely doesn't make any sense. Who are these people, what are they singing about, where are they, what does this have to do with anything? Right now, the show truly begins with Amelie's childhood. One idea: establish the two lovers in the first number, before jumping back in time.
-DESIGN: Stunning and more impressively, they found a visual world as unique yet separate from the film. The projections were especially lovely in providing texture and whimsy.
-SCORE: I could divide it in thirds. One third was romantic, clever, and quirky - spot on. Another third felt the need to explain the subtext with awkward, ham-handed lyrics (the closing number, I'm looking at you). And the last third were solos that got so involved with their own pop-song-derivative emotional cliches, you had no idea what they actually were singing about or what was happening. The worst of these were the two 11 o'clock numbers for Nino and Amelie. During Nino's song, as he searches through Paris for Amelie, my date turned to me and asked, genuinely, "what is he talking about?" I had no idea. Near the end of the song, he holds a note incredibly long, with no clear reason, and the audience applauds his efforts. At that moment, I realized the creative team must have also realized this number was not stopping the show, but stopping the plot. So, why not distract them with a party trick?
-DIRECTION / CHOREOGRAPHY: When the direction worked, it was heightening, expressive, imaginative and heart-warming. Too often, it was effortful, busy, and clunky. I imagine much of this would be improved simply with another rehearsal period. But it matters because often the effort to keep the ensemble moving and cleverness continuing came at the expense of moments of genuine connection and heart. Too often, it was unclear why people felt the way they did, what they wanted, because -quick!- we have more staging shtick to pull off! I think there is ample opportunity for more choreography to help with this. It often felt like the cast ran out
-TONE: The show has a hard time deciding what the tone of the piece is. There is a irreverence that can be playful and fun (like the goldfish), but often tip over into being too ironic. For instance, the gnome song is a great expression of Amelie's playful prank on her father, whereas the Elton John number was implausible as an actual fantasy of Amelie's. So, instead of bringing us closer to Amelie, it comes across as the writers showing off their parody skills. Most notable, though, was the tongue-in-cheek wayt he ensemble would "ooh" and "aah" when the lovers are finally meeting, complete with giant hearts projected on the set. This overly ironic, borderline cynical approach completely betrays what the piece wants ten minutes later, which is for you to be swooning over the romance.
-SAMANTHA BANKS: Recast. A beautiful face but simply no where near expressive enough for this character. Throughout the show, when we should be growing closer to Amelie and watching her soul awaken, her desire to truly connect with the world and her heart, we instead see nothing.