noradesmond said: "GavestonPS said: "Alex Kulak2 said: "Jarethan said: "I don't know the details -- I am sure Dollypop could write a book -- but I remember reading multiple times over the past 5 decades that Hello Dolly was not well reviewedwhen it ran in Detroit; apparently, gossip was that David Merrick had a big flop on his hands. I have read that they brought in (I think it was) Bob Merrillto write a song or two. Also, one of the two or three greatest production numbers, the title number, was added somewhere along the way. I do not know if it was added before completing the Detroit run and moving on."
It was Bob Merrill. He ghost wrote "Elegance", which blows my mind, because that's one of the best lyrics in the show.
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"Elegance" is by Bob Merrill, but I believe it was written before well before work on HELLO, DOLLY! began. IIRC, it was even performed (in some form or another)in another show. Whether he was brought in when DOLLY was out of town I can't recall, but it wouldn't surprise me.
[ETA per Wikipedia: "ThesongElegance, though credited to Herman, was written by Bob Merrill for the 1957 show New Girl in Town but deleted from the original production." I cannot independently confirm this.]
Charles Schwartz writes a whole chapter in his autobiography about coming in with Lee Adams (his longtime collaborator (BYE, BYE, BIRDIE et al.)). They restructured Act I so it ended with the parade and wrote a song called "Before the Parade Passes By". Champion and book writer Michael Stewart liked the new structure and used it, but Jerry Herman just took the title of the Schwartz/Adams song and wrote his own version of "Before the Parade Passes By". It was long rumored that Schwartz and Adams wrote the version heard in the show and Schwartz takes pains in his autobiography to set the record straight.
When the show came in, using the revised book proposed by Schwartz and Adams, and was a monster hit, Schwartz says they waited in vain for at least a "thank you" from the creative team. When none was forthcoming, they sued and won a small royalty which turned into a large amount of money over the monster run of the show.
But, yes, Dollypop is the expert. I just read Schwartz' book."
Maybe I'm confusing things with Bob Merrill and "Elegance", but didn't he also claim authorship of "Before The Parade Passes By"?"
I don't think so. I thought I saw somewhere that he also wrote "Motherhood", but Wikipedia just says he wrote "Elegance".
On that note, the show Merrill wrote "Elegance" for is a musical based on Anna Christie, the Eugene O'Neill drama about a prostitute trying to escape her old life. Where has this show been all my life?