"The two problems were terrible. There was no sense of connection or family."
I thought they had a nice moment during the "I love you this much" scene but other than that, I didn't feel it. The memories that should establish their connection in the beginning fell flat because there was so much to process for them as actors and for us as audience members. It was overwritten. I don't know if the lack of attachment to their mother was a failure of writing or acting.
"The older brother is suppose to be the smart one, but he says "****" every two words, and, like was said, he doesn't own those curses."
I was prepared to go along with it. OK, he wanted to be an archaeologist and has some very rudimentary knowledge of Ancient Egypt and Greek mythology. OK, he reads and doesn't take butterflies and can throw out an SAT word or two once in a while. In this world, I guess that passes for intelligence. But then Spinx comes in and the party guest and it all falls apart. He tries to reestablish control at the end but I can no longer buy him as even the smartest person in the room.
"Lola... I mean, he was fine. There was just no sense of WHY DOES THIS CHARACTER BELONG IN THIS PLAY."
I thought he was one of the better actors but he didn't fit in this world because his performance overwhelmed the older brother's. He was so forceful that parts of the play didn't make sense as written. It's hard to argue that you should give a bad performance to match someone else's low energy but... I think he could gave given a different performance. Less shouting perhaps.
"Why is there so much attention paid to cleaning up the room and making it look nice - like stacking wood planks against a street sign HUH?! - and yet there's maybe one line about "oh it looks fine." Huh?"
I think the set is alright if you imagine that the world has fallen apart. Roving gangs are violating young girls in supermarkets. People are making do with what they can, squatting in apartments without electricity or hot water. But when you realize that at least some institutions are still in operation, the decor makes less sense. Are the bowls of peanuts some pretense at normalcy or does the group just not know any better? And yet, there's still champagne and a ballgown (one of the things I did like... that was a nice dress) for The Duchess. You have throws to cover the seats. Why are you arranging children's books and Elmo toys on the shelves? Either there are metaphors or there aren't. You can't have it both ways.