I'm back from the first preview and the nicest thing I can say about Allegiance is that it's very, very earnest. I believe the creators' motivations and intentions are pure, but their final product is lacking, hindered by some of the most overwrought direction in recent memory.
And really, as cliche as some of the lyrics are and despite the fact that the book creates mouthpieces instead of characters (save one), the blame really needs to start at the top with Arima's direction. After his bloodless Carrie and mess of a Bare revival this was three strikes you're out. (The baseball reference is apt as there's a ripoff number of "What a Game" from Ragtime- a show Allegiance is desperately trying to be.) Arima is very found of staging the ensemble numbers in clusters across the front of the stage, everyone in spotlights, motionless with shoulders square belting as high as they can. The score most resembles A Tale of Two Cities (aka Wildhorn knockoff music), and Arima can't help himself but put the cast in Les Miz triangle formation as the music swells. The book is heavy-handed enough on its own, and Arima does the actors no favors by draining any subtly from the performances. The comedy is broad and the arguments are overblown. The poor actors playing the Army guards have been directed to act like the Nazis from The Sound of Music: Menacing, but a little too cartoonish to actually be threatening.
The book makes frequent reference to the fact that they don't have any medicine, clean water, beds to sleep on, etc and yet the detainees have enough energy to perform such acrobatic choreography you wouldn't believe. It would have been just as silly had Graciela Daniele made the townspeople of Brachen back flip and cartwheel around the stage upon Claire's arrival.
The saving grace of this production is the cast. The ensemble sings very well, and despite their small numbers they produce quite a sound. I assumed Takei was going to be the focal point of the show, but he isn't even given a song and plays the small, kooky grandfather role. Telly Leung and Lea Salonga are asked to do the heavy lifting and vocally they're up to the challenge. Unfortunately their characters on the page are paper. What do we really know about them? What specific details that make them rich individuals rather than mouthpieces to run down lists of what made the camps so terrible. Truly the camps were a great injustice, I'm not trying to diminish that, but this is a very clumsy way to get that point across. Poor Katie Rose Clark was stuck with the worst role- a nurse trying to help the detainees, but unable to because of the Army regulations.
The only actor given something to work with and ultimately made the strongest impression was Michael K Lee. He played the leader of the resistance movement in the camp and also was given the best number, "Paradise," which was a Scottsboro Boys-esque satire number put on at a camp party. It was one of the few times I completely got lost in the show and things caught fire.
Allegiance means so well, but good intentions alone can't will a good book and score into existence.
Marie: Don't be in such a hurry about that pretty little chippy in Frisco.
Tony: Eh, she's a no chip!