I'll revisit to one of my original posts (10/1) that posited that this material's DNA is fundamentally flawed as a musical foundation. I made a case that this biography doesn't have the root-for, compelling obstacles, or reversals that invite investment through (ir)resolution.. The documentary is an admittedly compelling glimpse at a curiosity. But it's not Grey Gardens, which presents a bona fide anti-hero's journey with genuine heartbreak. This origin story's socioeconomic tropes - particularly in traumatic 2025 in America - are more likely to put off an audience than welcome emotional participation. It may have proven unfixable.
More development" - even late stage - is often cited as a panacea for all troubled musicals. But how many shows are DOA from inception, because they musicalize a tale lacking a dramatic question in a compelling human being's narrative that no one cares to have answered? The root cause of "root for" in all storytelling, from the Greeks?
If a concept is flawed thus - impossible to explore and amplify in theatrical terms - it's often traced to this foundational issue of a dramatic question. Why did this person want what she/he wanted, and why did/didn't he/she attain it? We can all point to numerous musicals missing such a basic component in their DNA. A sound example of a show that found "the question" in reality-based source material might be Grey Gardens, a theater piece that carved a haunting first act out of the excavated clues only hinted at in the iconic documentary. It sounds so simplistic, but "How did Little Edie become Little Edie, and why" is a helluva arc, and it invites emotion-driven songs.
I would posit that such is the underlying problem here: Jackie's trajectory is untethered to an answerable question that anyone gives a damn about. Is that fixable, ever? I'd opine that it is not.
"I'm a comedian, but in my spare time, things bother me." Garry Shandling
Updated On: 10/22/25 at 11:03 PM