I made the trip to Boston to see this yesterday I thought it was near terrible. I can barely think of a single good thing to say about it except the singing was in tune (save for young Peter, whose voice appears to be changing).
The score was laughably bad, especially the soon to be camp classic "Circus of Your Mind," which was The Board of Governors and half of Wonderland rolled into one. That's even without mentioning the dancing mirror costumes which would have felt at home in Prince of Central Park or Into the Light!
The songs (and HORRID orchestrations) felt so out of place with the setting, time period, etc. Many felt like cut songs from The Pirate Queen and the others would have played well on Barney or Yo Gabba Gabba; the song for the four boys in act two was just too much.
The characters weren't all that developed and it never felt like there was much conflict or tension in the plot. Barrie is in a creative slump, but he sure gets over that quickly. The producer and actors have some doubts about the new play, but nothing is taken very seriously and you certainly aren't worried they're not going to pull it off.
When Sylvia begins coughing I thought, "well sure you're out of breath- you just led the whole town in a call and response Irish jig at the local pub. Who wouldn't be a little spent!?" Her fate comes out of nowhere, as does Carolee's last minute change of heart. Talk about an unearned character shift.
The choreography had a cohesive style, but I found it to be rather distracting, especially when the servants were dancing. Reminded me of the Death Takes a Holiday servants on speed.
Diane Paulus was the biggest letdown for me though. After being so wowed by Pippin there was just no magic here- only the effect with glitter impressed. I guess you can only do so much with this material, but she took flawed shows like Hair and Pippin and transformed them into something special. She needs to dig deeper and find some new ways to gild this turd.
Marie: Don't be in such a hurry about that pretty little chippy in Frisco.
Tony: Eh, she's a no chip!