A million spoilers below so definitely only read after you’ve seen the show
After having gone to see hundreds of shows, I’ve done something I’ve never done before: I went to see a preview. I’ve never gone before because my thinking is why would I pay just about full price to see a work in progress? In this case though, I was like, this show has existed for years, most of the cast is the same as in London, how much of a work in progress can it be?
Well… it definitely feels like a work in progress. It’s a very good show that could be great if it can fix a couple of flaws. Maybe those flaws can’t be fixed though because if they could, you’d think the creatives would have done it already. To be clear, the show is reaaaally good but its structural flaws are significant and leave a lasting impression since you can’t help but think that if they were fixed the show would be fantastic.
Here are the flaws as I saw them:
1. Act I has to end after Wait for Me. It’s as obvious to me as it is to everyone else including the show itself given Patrick Page’s tweet that they tried it but it didn’t work. I don’t know, if Chavkin can’t figure out a way to do it… I’m kind of disappointed in Chavkin. I just feel that if a significant portion of the audience thinks it’s obvious the act should end on that song and Chavkin and her team can’t figure out a way to make it work… what does it really say about them? To me that alone would disqualify her from the Tony.
2. The previous flaw is really caused by the flaw that is Why We Build a Wall. It’s a very good song that has to be kept, especially after nine years, but how exactly does it make sense in regards to the story. I mean why is there even a wall? Hades is underground right? The wall keeps out “poverty”? Huh? How does this song belong in the show? And apparently they have nowhere else to put it so it has to end Act I so Wait for Me can’t. Except Why We Build a Wall doesn’t really end Act I, not the night I saw it. The show I saw had it end with Amber Grey asking “does anyone want a drink?” That was the end that they chose! Instead of the act ending on a gigantic high, it ended on a lame throwaway joke. It was ridiculous. The show is imprisoned to this song that is really good but doesn’t fit and screws up the structure.
3. The Hades arc is unfulfilling. Initially, the show has him as the bad guy in a way that, to my recollection, he isn’t in the original myth (In the original, doesn’t Persephone die through no fault of Hades? In Hadestown, evil Hades gets her to sign her life away). Then the show has him come around and turn good when Orpheus’ song moves him… except he goes rogue again when he places the condition on Orpheus not looking back. If you’re going to change the myth to incorporate a Hades starts bad and turns good arc, you should keep him good and have him say while he would love to free them, the underworld has laws of its own, and they’ll only be able to leave if they don’t look back. Having him place the condition at the end screws up the supposed growth of the Hades/Persephone relationship. How will things change in the fall when Hades hasn’t changed?
4. Others may disagree but I thought it was a flaw for the show to be a tragedy yet, until the last scene, come across as hopeful and optimistic. As in, even when Eurydice is working down below, it always felt it would work out for her (possibly because she and especially Orpheus are played with childlike innocence). Hadestown doesn't really come off as a tragic love story since the love story part is unconvincing. As others said, there's no real romance/spark between Orpheus and Eurydice (I think it's because Orpheus especially comes across as an innocent child). Rather the show comes off as an "overcoming obstacle" story except this time they don't overcome the obstacle. If someone was unfamiliar with the myth and only saw the musical, wouldn’t they have thought it would have a happy ending? It had that feel to me to the point that I was actually wondering if they were going to rewrite the myth and give it that happy ending. It seemed like the creatives knew that having the show end in tragedy was a problem given the overall tone of the show, so they had the raise a cup song as a way to end on a uplifting note, but I thought it just didn’t work. Apparently they did too since they tried taking it out and saw it didn’t work the other way either. Either way isn’t an ideal end. And isn’t it insane that nine years after the concept album, they still aren’t sure of how to end the show?
5. Speaking of other things that didn’t work for me, Amber Grey’s song to start Act 2 just seemed completely off. The show presents her as this sad figure whose relationship with Hades is almost a prison but then suddenly she turns into the sultry caricature from Great Comet. I was waiting for her to bust out “Charming”. It just seemed so out of character and also seemed like it was thrown in there to give Amber Grey a signature number.
6. On a positive note, the way the set opened up as Orpheus goes down to Hades was amazing. I didn’t even know something like that could be done! It was just really impressive (which is why the Act had to end there!). As a whole I really liked the set with the rotations and sinking center so points to Chavkin there.
7. I adore Eva Noblezada and would watch her read a phone book and, unlike others, liked Reeve Carney’s high notes. I thought Anais Mitchell did a good job with that song also since there was a lot of pressure to deliver a great song given how the song itself is responsible for ending winter. You can’t have a crap song for that and I thought Anais delivered. In general I thought the music was fantastic.
8. Anyway, overall I think the problem with the show is that the creatives are too in love with individual parts that don’t fit the overall structure. On one hand, they don’t want to take those parts out because they are, when examined on their own without the overriding story, great. But they make the whole less than the sum of the parts and overall had me feel the show is a missed opportunity rather than unabashed success.
Updated On: 4/4/19 at 01:39 AM