I found the Bar Mitzvah scene excruciating. One, I don't think a Bar Mitzvah has looked like that in 30 years, especially, as you say, a "Long Island Bar Mitzvah." Also, it was incredibly boring. I don't understand why we needed to waste so much time with McPhee singing boring songs without anything exciting happening. The only potential plot development that came out of this was the agent or whoever he is that handed her the business card, which could have been accomplished in far less screen time.
I also thought the Messing/Chase scene was laughably bad. I actually think the plot line could go somewhere but every scene they're together just looks so lazily acted with horrendous writing. (And I ordinarily love them both!)
Another major issue I had: the whole Ellis now teaming up with Anjelica Huston's character. I find the Ellis character annoying because the whole thing seems so childish. He runs around divulging everyone's secrets with no apparent objective in mind and no one has thought that perhaps he shouldn't be sitting in a room watching rehearsals of a musical in development? Also, why is he taking rich investors/producers to cheap bars? I have a very hard time believing Huston's character and the investor would ever step foot there. More importantly, why is he having drinks at all with them? It makes little to no sense to me.
I thought the episode was ok but some of these glaring plot issues are hard to get past. It was a major improvement over the first few episodes but I thought it regressed a bit from last week.
Some positives:
Loved the rehearsal at the end of the episode. (so what if an actor would never scream at a director?) It's a drama! I also love the tension developing among the creative team and I definitely foresee something happening to Tom/Messing's character. That could be interesting.
I like Ivy's hallucinations and that entire plot line. It makes sense given the crazy drugs she's on and I really like the inner psychological battle we're seeing unfold. The part and rehearsals are clearly draining her both physically and mentally, something actors experience quite often. This could be interesting as she will probably confront the director in the future.
Sorry for the rambling - just pouring out my thoughts!
Scratch and claw for every day you're worth!
Make them drag you screaming from life, keep dreaming
You'll live forever here on earth.