bear88 said: "One other thing about whether Frank's movie is a commercial success.
I think the story makes more sense if it is a box office hit. Frank would have everything he thought he wanted: commercial success after years of struggle and setbacks, the glamour of show business that always attracted him, the clout to make his own personal and business decisions - even if they're selfish. Why isn't he happy, though?."
That makes sense to me. I just went through several boxes and found my print out of the 1981 script--this was the proof edition (with Sondheim's pencilled in corrections) that was ready to be published in 1982 by Dodd, Mead and Co, so reflects the final changes made to the show in the very long original previews and I know the opening was re-written a lot (Gussie doesn't push Meg into the pool--something that apparently always got a laugh in previews--nor does she throw iodine like in the revision.)
Anyway, reading the opening scenes while watching the 2013 video of the Maria Friedman production I was surprised at just how rewritten the opening scene is--not just a different song, but the dialogue, aside from some quips mostly from Mary, was all rewritten too.
Notably, Mary is a critic in the 1981 opening and everyone (mostly Frank and Meg) are curious what her review of the new movie will be--no mention of her becoming a novelist. She also at first holds back on saying anything mean, or anything at all about the movie, till near the end of the scene when it's noted how drunk she has become.
(There's also a character called "the protege" who tries to impress Frank and we are told wrote the score for the movie because he has a "newer" sound than Frank.)
As for the success of the movie--this is why I thought in the revision the movie is meant to be good, or at least successful. As you can hear from the 1981 cast album, the partygoers almost immediately make comments about the movie being terrible (though they say "beautiful" to his face.) "When a movie's that bad what can anyone say..." etc. And it's revealed that this is Frank's first big shot at making a movie--Gussie persuaded him to invest everything in it for a brand new start, so he's anxious to find out if it's a hit.
In That Frank and the revised script, while it's true no one comments if the movie is actually good (and Mary makes it clear she doesn't think it is,) The party goers instead though now say "I said Frank one day you'll be running the studio," call the movie a watershed, repeatedly say what a success he is, that Frank really knows what the public wants, has taste and talent, bla bla. Now it's easy to think they're being disingenuous and just feeding off of his success. Notably the lyric "when you make a movie that bad what can anyone say" is now "when you make a movie that successful where do you go? Paramount!"
Oh and no mention of his son at all in 1981. No withering "You are all junk and you, you deserve them" when Mary exits, instead she just says "If anyone deserves all this, you do.", Gussie doesn't even say she's leaving Frank (though she obviously is considering it--oh and she's upset because Frank doesn;'t care that she got a fancy interview about a dress line she's lending her name to or something.)
And of course in 1981 this was followed by two different scenes--1975 at a restaurant where Mary tricks Charley into meeting her (and sings Old Friend/Like it Was) because she knows Frank is coming there to be interviewed about his upcoming movie and she wants them to reconcile after the debacle of the TV interview the year before, and then 1974 where we get Franklin Shepard Inc. Oh in the 1975 scene there also is a bit more dialogue about why Frank has moved into movie producing (something in the revision I always found perfectly unclear.)
I know one of the first revisions Furth made for the 1985 LaJolla production was to combine these scenes--all now taking place in 1973 for whatever reason--so Like It Was is sung right before Franklin Shepard Inc and the interview, on the same day, which changes its meaning significantly
Anyway I won't blather on anymore but I hadn't thought to do a direct comparison before and it's been years since I read the 1981 script--while we all knew Furth made significant rewrites (even if Jesse Green and others act like the revival still has his old "awful" script) I didn't realize that at least in the opening scene it's a 90%+ rewrite. But in general I always think Furth gets an unfair rep for Merrily--he came to it after Sondheim and Prince had largely worked out what they wanted to do, and I actually think the book is pretty good. It doesn't help that, as anyone who tries to do research on Merrily or Company well knows, Furth basically hated to do interviews and rarely talked about his work let alone his revisions to Merrily or his more minor 1995/96 Company revisions (James Goldman--when discussing Follies--was only slightly better but you can find some quotes from him, and about the various revisions over the years as well as the 1987 Follies rewrite.)
Updated On: 11/30/23 at 03:41 AM