Just got back from tonight's show and I'm surprised to say I think the skeleton is really there, but some of the fat needs to be trimmed and the muscles need to be strengthened before NYC.
The performances all work for the most part. Javier Munoz walks away with the show effortlessly. Beth Leavel is terrific, her material just needs some sharpening (more on that later). Taylor Iman Jones is winning, but also needs more focus. Megan Mesako Haley is almost there, but she could drop in emotionally a bit more.
Elton's score is boring, but honestly I didn't think it was any better or worse than Billy Elliot, which also doesn't have a good score. What set Billy Elliot apart though, was Stephen Daldry's ability to heighten moments and make something that was on paper, trite and dull, explode with emotion and sentimentality.
I think Anna Shapiro and her team need to focus on how to open up more of the numbers in that way...and trim the fat where it's slowing down the machine.
For example, in terms of opening up numbers; Emily's number about surviving at Runway has all the goods to be a real showstopper, but the paltry staging of it (flat, in front of two desks, with a random flying moment) doesn't tell us anything about the super cool and terrifying place she's working. Shouldn't we be watching Andy literally chase Emily through the halls, through different departments, as everything hurriedly (but efficiently) flies around them? Later in Act II, we watch Miranda's psyche open up in an interesting stage picture during her big song; why is that moment happening, but we don't get it for the biggest character of all, which is Runway itself? I also liked the crazy reveal in the Act I finale, but I wanted that moment to have a bigger dance sequence on the stairs, rather than just in front of the scrim.
And on that note, the choreography overall has a flatness problem; must it ALL be in a straight two lines, in unison? The movement itself is interesting, but the stage pictures are not. And we need that "oomph" to make some the admittedly droll songs work. This was also true of Emily's Act II opener, which was a charming enough song.
I completely understand everyone's feelings about the costumes. That said, the clothes worn are ACTUAL fashion pieces up there. Sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't. In my opinion, when seeing a big splashy musical, I'd rather see a show with cheaper costumes that EVOKE fashion, than actual fashion pieces that may or may not function as costumes. The show has chosen the latter approach, and I think it makes everything look unfocused. Also, for the first half of Act !, they are putting Beth in these big, chunky, 80's looking black heels and several variations of the same power suit that have no waistline. Miranda Priestly would not be caught DEAD without a silhouette and a pair of stilettos. and even if it's justified as Miranda "wouldn't wear stilettos to work", that doesn't matter to us as the audience. We want to buy into the fantasy. Her costumes are better in Act 2...but when we see her in her moment of vulnerability in the bathrobe, I feel like we should be shocked and disarmed. We're not, because she's looked that frumpy before. I also get making Andy look as nerdy as she does in the beginning, but it's SO overwrought that I just couldn't stop thinking about how DISTRACTINGLY ugly she was dressed. She should just dress like a normal lazy hipster, not some colorblind toddler. Also, doen't people in the industry wear more black? What are all of these people doing in these bright pinks and yellows and blues? The palette is confused. when we see a pop of color, it should be very intentional.
In terms of trimming fat; ALL of the friends' stuff can be trimmed. I understand having them there, so it doesn't feel like it's just Andy fighting with a dude the whole time; that she's mean to her girlfriends too; but all of it is just too much. The scenes are too long and they weigh down the show when it starts to pick up momentum. "The Old You" should be moved from where it is now to be between Andy and her boyfriend right before she goes to Paris.
And finally, the biggest note of all - we need to be SURPRISED by Andy's journey. This is a coming of age story about how an artist finds their voice and by the means they learn to harness their own ambition. Andy "means business". So let's see it. I agree that Miranda needs to be written as much meaner to Andy overall; but Andy also needs to be mean. Meaner to her boyfriend, meaner to Miranda; sometimes we should see the devil creep in. Andy's goal needs to be to fight not to please Miranda, but to defeat her. she fights for the job because she doesn't like losing. She's a monster, just like Miranda...then, when the turn comes, and Andy realizes what she has become, it's a bigger surprise and a bigger catharsis. Taylor Iman Jones has the ability to be a diva; the show needs to let her go there.
OK, sorry if this was rambly...I just had SO many thoughts. While watching it I just kept pressing my hands to my cheeks being like..."this could work". it just needs more time.