All I can do is echo the praise on this board already. It's not a perfect show yet, but they have a hit on their hands. It must be nice to be David Yazbek right now--the toast of Broadway with a Tony winning musical selling out every night and an out of town tryout that has audiences rolling in the aisles.
I saw the film for the first time earlier this week, and I loved it. I loved the musical as well. The overall structure is mostly the same, but the musical captures what works about the film while finding its own voice. I couldn't help but think the entire time that this is what Pretty Woman could have been.
Santino Fontana is giving a star performance. Early on, when his character is temperamental and not so lovable, he infuses the character with so much charm that you sign on to following his story anyway. As the character grows and changes, you buy every beat of it. I've long been a fan of his, and I was so thrilled to see him in a role where he can really show off.
The supporting cast is also consistently fantastic. Everyone rises to the occasion in their respective moments, and each character is given proper time to shine. The book is filled to the brim with witty jokes that just keep coming. The choreography stands out for its inventiveness and creativity throughout--it excels even in moments when the choreography need only serviceable to keep the story moving forward.
And then there's the score--I love David Yazbek (Women on the Verge, especially, is a very frequently played album for me) and the score has the same jazzy style and off-kilter verve one expects from him. As others mentioned, the songs for the supporting characters especially stand out. And for the character of Max (a hot, dumb reality star making his Broadway debut, a role not in the original film) Yazbek once again shows us how to write a smart song for a dumb character. His lyrics are sharp, ironic, and entirely within his voice without ever sacrificing the voices of the characters. And it is so relieving to hear a new Broadway score which doesn't just have its lead actors scream in the stratosphere the entire evening and instead draws you in with, well, good writing.
All that said, here are my few qualms that if the creative team addresses would make this show even better:
1. The diegetic numbers for the show-within-the-show don't entirely work. The show-within-the-show is clearly supposed to be bad, but it seems that Yazbek struggles to write songs that are entirely bad, so they get caught in a weird middle-ground. The fake out opening number is not a strong enough opening to the show, and it isn't bad enough to allow you to actually laugh at it. Santino's audition song, similarly, starts as a run-of-the-mill power ballad that he then is supposed to inject with life, but the song doesn't start out bad enough to be funny, and then it can only soar so high by the end if we have been set up to believe the material isn't great.
2. As others have noted, there are too many applause-grabbing lines. It's well and good to know that the show's heart is in the right place, but feminist manifesto lines are shoehorned in more for the sake of making the audience clap than because they naturally fit within the story. A couple are fine, but the show stops a few too many times to make sure we're all on the same page about feminism. Showing would be better than telling. Similarly, many of the jokes feel like stand-up jokes inserted into a story and aren't grounded enough in the situations. Thankfully, there are enough fantastic jokes that the show can afford to cut the extraneous ones.
3. The best songs in the show are for the supporting characters. Santino needs a stronger late-in-act-two number--and it should probably be in the moment leading up to him taking off his wig rather than in his dressing room before the opening night.
But honestly, even if they don't change a single word, this show is going to be a big hit. Word of mouth will do this show very well. What a welcome relief after the disaster of Pretty Woman and the beautiful, unfocused mess of The Cher Show. I've seen almost every out-of-town tryout that has come to Chicago since The Addams Family, and the only show that has really rivaled this one was Kinky Boots. Again, that's not to say that it's perfect just yet, but there were stretches where I thought to myself "this is what musical comedy should aspire to be." Well done.