I left very unsatisfied.
Pasek and Paul, an extremely talented pair, have written a great score. If not as consistently thrilling as Dogfight, it holds many wonderful melodies, and a cast recording should show the production at its best. For those who are going because of Dogfight, know that they have not written another "folk" musical theatre score, but a "pop" musical theatre score, and occasionally that choice does not serve the piece. "Walking Through a Window", "For Forever","Good For You", and "So Big / So Small" are standouts and the all-around wonderful cast sings the hell out of everything.
The play, unfortunately, is structured like a predictable B-movie: hero wants to fit in, hero tells a lie, hero becomes popular due to lie, lie gets out of control, hero comes clean, "always be yourself". No matter what differences in the story, I always knew that eventually the Evan would tell the truth, so there was little dramatic tension.
The first act tried to walk the thin line of drama and dark comedy, and fails. I don't thinks jokes are right for the piece. A few one liners might lighten the mood enough, but, as stated above, the acorn line is egregious. The second act is far better in terms of dramatic tension and story-telling, but I was never actually moved by the piece. Also, I don't think Evan ever actually talked about trying to kill himself, although Connor's "ghost" told him he didn't really break his arm by falling. "Sincerely, Me" and "To Break In a Glove" were low points of the score and plot.
The character of Alana serves no purpose, and I was never sure if she was supposed to be commenting on how society takes advantage of horrific situations, and I don't think the creators know either. She plays the satirical part in act one, but suddenly becomes a dramatic point of act two. Jared is just rude and not funny at all. I think Alana and Jared should be combined and be given a clearer dramatic structure. I never knew what Alana wanted or needed in the piece and having Jared create the Conner Project with Evan would serve more dramatic purpose.
I really wanted to be moved by the piece, but I'm still unaffected. I hope it evolves during previews and continues to get better.
"Sticks and stones, sister. Here, have a Valium." - Patti LuPone, a Memoir