I saw the show on Friday night but am just getting the chance to write about it now. Like many of you, I really wanted to like this show, but I left disappointment by how much potential was left untapped.
I actually thought Act 1 was pretty interesting, if not a bit slow. I particularly liked the Act 1 closer (also the reprise of the title song) with
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all the imagined/shadow characters asking the protagonists whether they truly understood the risks and potential consequences of tripping together. It made for an interesting premise that was never realized in Act 2. I also found the restaurant booth rising in the air in darkness/under "starlight" to be a compelling visual complement to the "just don't fall" lyric.
As others have already mentioned, Act 2 is simply too long and could benefit from some deep cuts. The most compelling parts of Act 2 (which didn't happen nearly enough) were when the characters interacted with each other during their hallucinations. For instance, I found it super interesting when
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Huxley envisioned himself dancing with Maria only to find that Clare had taken Maria's place as his dance partner. Huxley's subsequent panic felt merited because Clare became an unexpected part of Huxley's processing of grief.
Unfortunately, thought-provoking moments like this were far and few between. Too many times when one character was having visions, the other protagonists simply functioned as commentators or (worse yet) were taken out of the scene altogether. Why create a story about people tripping together if there are so few meaningful interactions between them all?
Also, the banal preachiness of James Lapine's book -- especially as Act 2 came to a close -- induced eyerolls from me. It felt as though Lapine didn't think the audience would understand what he was trying to get across. Sorry, man, but raising the concept of a "23rd ingredient" (fairly insipid, if you ask me) -- and then basing an entire song about it -- is like writing "For Good" but taking out genuine retrospection, emotion, or connection between the characters.
My major takeaway was that this musical could really have benefitted from another year of workshopping and out-of-town tryouts. A friend who saw the show with me felt it would have been considerably better as a play. At least the set design and projections were interesting. And Carmen Cusack was as glorious as I had hoped.
Oh, and I was also at the first performance where Tony Yazbeck was out. Definitely a bummer.