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Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/24/13 at 11:38pm

First of all....Does Liaisons really rhyme with Raisins?

And what about this?

What once was a sumptuous feast
Is figs.
No--not even figs--raisins!

Kind of weak.

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/24/13 at 11:46pm

That's the joke.

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/24/13 at 11:49pm

This post is weak.

Listen, I don't take my clothes off for anyone, even if it is "artistic". - JANICE

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 12:59am

Moderator: Please delete this thread. It is blasphemy.

But also, it's stupid.

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 9:05am

When I read the title of this thread, the first thing I thought of was the raisin/liaisons rhyme.

Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people. - Eleanor Roosevelt

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 9:10am

Merry Christmas to all, and to all, a good fight.

"Jaws is the Citizen Kane of movies."

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Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 9:12am

I should also add, the raisin/liaison line was the only line in the entire Sondheim canon I could think of.

Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people. - Eleanor Roosevelt

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 9:15am

There are several lyrics that while they work are a little desperate for me. I'm sure this thread will get a TON of backlash but it's nice that every so often talk about the man's weaker moments

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 9:26am

I've always been impressed with Sondheim's own (as much as possible) objectivity of his work. He doesn't seem to regard it as unimpreachable, hallowed or sacrosanct.

I'm sure he is sensitive to criticism, who isn't? But he does seem courageous enough to often acknowledge the gap between what he was aiming for and what he came up with. Which, of course, makes fans like me love his work even more.

Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people. - Eleanor Roosevelt

Updated On: 12/25/13 at 09:26 AM

#10

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 10:53am

There are quite a few in Into The Woods will have a think after Christmas and note down.

#11

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 1:19pm

Don't trouble yourself.

#12

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 3:00pm

Part of "Good Thing Going" always bugs me:

We took for granted a lot, and still I say,
It could have kept on growing,
Instead of just kept on,

Seems like something is missing at the end of "Instead of just kept on." I've never heard anyone use the expression "It just kept on."

#13

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 3:44pm

I think "kept on staying the same" is the implication. I don't think you're meant to think "kept on" is an expression.

The only lyric that really bugs is from "Country House." I don't consider that song to be Follies canon anyway, but "you can't afford to be bored with your board" always felt like a half-assed lyric to me.

#14

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 4:07pm

"Oh when the Jets roll in at the Cornball dance, we'll be the sweetest dressing gang in pants"

I know it was early in his career, but has always got to me.

#15

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 4:08pm

Sondheim has always cited his own lyric to "I Feel Pretty" as weak not because it isn't good but because it's a little too witty and sounds like the author speaking rather than the character. But it isn't a bad lyric by any measure; Sondheim on his worst day is still better than most people on their best day.

#16

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 4:56pm

^^^^ Agreed. But…

"Then I careered from career to career."

I'm sure it was good for me to learn that "career" could be used correctly as a verb, but I've yet to hear it used as such anywhere else. To me that line has one "career" too many.

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I wish Sondheim would acknowledge that his (really Sheldon Harnick's) complaints about "I Feel Pretty" concern a theatrical convention, not some sort of universal "law".

The characters in LI'L ABNER are neither clever nor educated and they rhyme away madly for comic effect. Different type of show; different convention.

And is Petra supposed to have come to service directly from a Ph.D. program at the U. of Stockholm? If I'm not mistaken, "The Miller's Son" is the most heavily rhymed lyric in the NIGHT MUSIC score (with the possible exception of "Now"). Yet Petra's number works wonderfully, if you ask me, even if the rhyming only connotes what we might call "street smarts". (See, too, Dorine in TARTUFFE.)

Updated On: 12/25/13 at 04:56 PM

#17

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 5:20pm

StageStuckLad, that's funny. That oh so simple truncated lyric is actually one I think of as pure genius.

My least favorite lyrics are actually the spoken ones in Being Alive. I feel like the friends are there to hit us over the head with the message of a marvelous song that easily stands on its own.

#18

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 6:46pm

"Too busy to know that they're fools."

No, they are not.

"No Place Like London." Repugnant lyrics, repugnant show.

"day after day after day after day......."

Oh please, must you bludgeon us with the same banality from here to eternity?

"You're always sorry, You're always grateful."

Wow, what profound insight, so brilliantly expressed!

Updated On: 12/25/13 at 06:46 PM

#19

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 8:09pm

I'm a huge fan of Passion, but this has always stood out for me:

A love as pure as breath,
As permanent as death,
Implacable as stone.
A love that, like a knife,
Has cut into a life
I wanted left alone.

What bothers me specifically is the extremely trite "knife" simile hot on the heels of three much more striking ones. Of course knives cut; there's nothing interesting to me about that turn of phrase.

#20

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 8:40pm

I am always frustrated by "I'll call you in the morning or my service will explain", not because it doesn't rhyme, but because it seems like there are too many syllables to fit with the music comfortably. But maybe it's just me.

#21

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 8:54pm

After 8, I realize you dislike Sondheim's work with a passion, but isn't there any song, or even one lyric, of his that you don't hate? I am not trying to be snarky, I am honestly interested. Obviously, Sondheim is not your type of music or theatre, and I respect that. But, do you really hate every single word he puts to music, or note he writes? Even I, who detest Andrew Lloyd Webber and his work, appreciate "Tell Me On A Sunday", especially when someone as talented as Berdadette Peters or Betty Buckley is singing it!

"Sticks and stones, sister. Here, have a Valium." - Patti LuPone, a Memoir

Updated On: 12/25/13 at 08:54 PM

#22

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/25/13 at 9:17pm

After Eight said:
"No Place Like London." Repugnant lyrics, repugnant show.

Repugnant lyrics? Repugnant show? I can never take another thing you say seriously.

#23

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/26/13 at 2:35am

"but isn't there any song, or even one lyric, of his that you don't hate?"

Sally Durant Plummer,

No, I do not hate every song he wrote. Most of them just leave me cold, or irritate me mightily.

And by the way, the subject of this thread is Sondheim's poor lyrics. Many people have noted examples thereof, so why are you getting on my case for doing what everyone else is doing? Is this thread restricted to only his fans? It certainly wasn't stated as such.

Now, YOU say you detest ALW and his work. DETEST? Really? You really DETEST the music to By Jeeves?

Updated On: 12/26/13 at 02:35 AM

#24

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/26/13 at 3:11am

Gaveston,

I love the 3 "careers" in that line! She's made a career out of careering from job to job.

#25

Sondheim's weaker lyrics/rhymes

Posted: 12/26/13 at 3:46am

I don't think Sondheim is beyond reproach but I have to jump in re the line from PASSION, which is one of my favorites from Sondheim. Of course a knife cuts, it's not like Sondheim is trying to surprise us there, what's so brilliant about it is that Fosca (impersonating Giorgio at that point) is saying that he believes her love for him is comparable to a knife rather than to a more typically romantic symbol. Using knife as the metaphor there suggests violence and death, which of course foreshadows the ending but also changes since it is Fosca who dies after having sex with Giorgio.
Phyllis, can we just pretend "Country House" doesn't even exist?

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