Jallenc32 said: Act 1 felt like it should have ended after The Battle of Yorktown (or even What Comes Next). We have a huge emotional high point of the American victory in the Revolution and then the act just keeps going.
I agree. I love Hamilton quite a bit, but there could be a little bit of song shuffling to make the show tighter. If I was handed the almighty editing pen, here's what I would do:
-Towards the end of Act I, go straight from "Yorktown" right into "Non-Stop." This way, you don't lose any of the momentum of "Yorktown" that currently gets drained away by "What Comes Next" and "Dear Theodosia." I'd carve out a small scene break with vamping towards the end of "Yorktown" to allow the Laurens letter scene to stay in, though it may mean having to cut Laurens singing his short "I may not live to see our glory..." reprise.
-Cut "Dear Theodosia" entirely. Sorry. Really I am. The melody is beautiful, but it's probably the least necessary song in the whole show. We already know Hamilton has a kid. And of course Hamilton and Burr love their kids. What parent doesn't? Why do we need 3 minutes for Burr and Hamilton to say "I love my kid?" Find a way to incorporate that Burr has a daughter into the beginning of "Non-Stop." It is about what happened "after the war," after all.
-Begin Act II with "What Comes Next?" It's a humorous way to slide back into the meat of the Hamilton story.
-Then the rest of Act II can proceed as as written, although you could probably shave a minute off "Take a Break" and not lose much.
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Updated On: 10/20/15 at 02:00 PM