MarilynMonroeSmash said: "I attended last night and this was probably one of the worst pieces of theater I have ever seen.
To preface, I must say the performances are excellent though. The cast is making the most out of nothing. I wish Jeremy was in the Florence Welch production because he’s a great Gatsby; he just has terrible material to work with. I also enjoyed some of the direction and the sets (except for Gatsby’s mansion, which looked like a factory), but the writing was a mess. These authors, especially the book writer, should never be allowed to touch an American classic again.
The score is beyond generic. There is not one song that stands out. They all sound the same and the lyrics are pretty terrible and bland. It felt all surface level for these characters while trying to go deep, but never reaching past ground soil. I think five songs can be cut off right from the bat. Too much music that I don’t think I will ever list to again. And it does all sound like other shows. I couldn’t stop singing Santa Fe at intermission.
Now the book…I am embarrassed for Kait Kerrigan because it is obvious that she failed 11th grade English. She completely misses the point of Fitzgerald’s work and removes everything for Gatsby that makes it Gatsby. She has altered the plot and character motivations way too much to suit her own ego. (Remember she is the person who said she never liked the book before and thought she couldn’t relate to the characters, so the first thing she was going to do was change that!) The story is so uneven and at times feels like more of a love story between Nick and Jordan than Gatsby and Daisy. I can go in detail about all the plot changes if anyone wants because there is a lot.
I’m not a huge fan of the novel and I understand some things will always have to be changed for a stage adaptation, but I do think when adapting a great American novel, you don’t start rubbing your fingers on it and try “to improve it.” I don’t know where the previous poster was sitting because only the Jeremy and Eva fans enjoyed this or people who have never read the book. There felt like a mutual feeling in the audience that night that we all watched a trainwreck that night. I didn’t hear anyone say a word leaving the theater. Everyone quickly left to get to their cars or trains. I have attending a lot of first previews and the excitement and tension of these performances can usually make **** shine, but no amount of glitter, glue or bleach can make this **** shine."
Attended 10/13 and echo many of these sentiments. It was one of the worst shows I’ve seen. Music (particularly lyrics) were forgettable or just bad. The pacing and book/story were a mess. Scene transitions were a mess and too often went from some long, story development scene and emotional musical closer RIGHT into a different song with a different mood. The conflict and dramatic “climax” was messy and felt very rushed - although at my show they had to stop the show for 15 minutes because of an apparent issue with their big prop gimmick, and they skipped the rest of the scene and re-started with the dramatic high. I also found it very strange for Daisy to have her 11 o’clock number after the other dramatic climax that kinda of ends all suspense. Thought the story telling into the trip to the plaza was mind boggling. Not sure if it was the goal for the character or if Sam Pauly’s acting is …shall we say more suited for a show like Six. I don’t know the novel too well but it seems they just struggled to capture what meant to be a long-form story in 2.5 hours while trying to cram so much music into it.
I went for Jeremy and Eva and they did not disappoint despite the material to work with.