There are things to admire in MR. SATURDAY NIGHT, but overall this may be the most frustratingly bad musical of the season.
thoughts:
– Billy Crystal is good in it!!!! He is a great star who’d be even better with good material! I’m the target audience in terms of humor, and even I wasn’t laughing that much. TOOTSIE is a much much funnier musical (and better source material).
– The score is by far the worst of JRB’s career. Not helped by a minuscule orchestration (not even a single reed or string instrument so ballads aren’t being accompanied by brass???) I've concluded that JRB does not know how to write a musical. He can write songs for musicals. But Alfred Uhry and Hal Prince shaped PARADE, and everything else he’s written beyond the song cycles (yes, Last 5 Years is a song cycle) is a narrative mess.
– Say what you want about Jerry Zaks, but he knows how to build a show around a star to let them shine. John Rando has not done that here. Yes, Billy IS the show, but it almost feels like the show is dragging him down. Billy alone onstage explaining the plot of MR. SATURDAY NIGHT for 2 hours and doing bits would be better. The design, direction, choreography, and overall calibration of the show are weak.
– The show desperately needed a co-bookwriter who knows how to structure a musical (a Meehan or Fierstein type) and a director who can challenge the star AND find more creative ways to incorporate music into the show (a Stroman or Zaks type), who can challenge the star and push them AND find more creative ways to incorporate music into the show.
– This is the rare show where Act 2 is better than Act 1. Act 2 has actual stakes (Buddy gets an audition at the end of act 1, which sets up all the action for act 2) and better songs. I liked Billy’s 11 o’clock number.
– The trio playing all the bit parts is VERY fun and hard-working (Mylinda Hull especially). The cast is uniformly good. The 3 women in Buddy’s life are irritating because they’re mostly underwritten or don’t have great material (Chasten and Shoshana especially, tho JRB tries with Shoshana).
If I had a note on how to proceed forward, I guess it would be just add as many gags and jokes as possible and do whatever you can to make Billy shine. And stop playing jazz standards before the show: it is a sad reminder that nothing in this show could ever be as good as those songs.