Went to the 2pm matinee on 11/4.
Not my style to engage in online forums, but Tina Fey's career means a lot to me personally and given her history of perusing message boards, I want to contribute my feedback—if it might help make this show reach its potential.
I haven't read all the reactions here, so sorry if any of this is redundant:
What's working
- The book is beyond solid: great narrative structure, the story from the film is in tact but adapted well to live on stage, the characters are richer, the jokes are sharp and topically freshened up. If beats don't seem to land or flow, it has more to do with the score and lyrics (more on that later) rather than the what/where/how they happen.
- The cast: They all more or less nail it. They make great choices with the material given. The comic timing is there, emotional intelligence is there, physicality is there. Especially noteworthy is that the score has many power moments vocally, and they all rise up to those challenges. I'd say Gretchen, Cady, and Damien come out strongest; Regina is weaker relative to its onscreen portrayal, but it's hardly a bad performance.
- Scenic design, projections, and staging: Projection design will always have its naysayers, but I thought it was particularly effective here. With some exceptions, the projections are mostly static to make cosmetic changes to the scenery (gym walls become classroom walls become mall walls, etc.), which is good because they aren't disorienting. While in school, I was taught to prioritize economical design, and this set is great in that regard because it gets a lot of mileage out of a semi-circle, with essentially a singular playing space in center stage and mostly small practical moving pieces. And the way staging and choreography is used to transition the scenes is smart and efficient (like how turning desks 90-degrees and a light cue suddenly creates a new classroom with different characters).
- Karen's sexy-Halloween-costume-send-up song: It's everything. Best part of the show.
What needs help
- The (rest of the) score and lyrics: Ugh. I had high hopes because I've loved everything Jeff Richmond has done on 30 Rock and Kimmy Schmidt ("Rural Juror" and "Just Go On" make me laugh/cry every time I hear them). In every brief opportunity he's been given, he's demonstrated a knack for writing melodies and, more importantly, for capturing the emotional truth and narrative purpose of any particular musical moment (e.g., you should feel sad here, this should feel climactic here, etc.). I had categorized him as "Gets It", so if anyone was going to make the leap to musical theatre score composer, I had faith he could. Alas... Most of the problems in the show lie in the score and Nell Benjamin's lyrics, in that they really f*ck with the flow and structure of the narrative. Moments that aren't super important seem to drag on forever (looking at you, "Apex Predator" ugh), or climactic moments will have the right amount of melodic heft but are brought down with problematic lyrics (like the Act I closer: it's intended to function as that important moment of transition from Regina's fall from power to Cady's rise as the queen bee, and it's called "Justice"; but I don't think everyone's resentment of Regina is established enough to warrant a rousing ensemble number rejoicing about justice being served; like, were all of you really that mad about Regina? It's established that she does evil bitchy sh*t, but with the exception of Gretchen, Cady, and Janis, no one else seems to express resentment towards her, so the fact that this number is lyrically premised on achieving "Justice" for the school barely made sense). And the melodies themselves just aren't all that catchy or dynamic and actually sound kind of dated. The music lives in that rockish pop territory that a lot of post-2000 movies-adapted-into-musicals seem eager to occupy. I think Jeff needs to go back to the drawing board, go back to what I know he knows (more "Just Go On" and that sound of a classically catchy show tune, and less... trash he found at Nell's house, leftover from Legally Blonde).
- A big moment that didn't really land for me—and it really needs to land, as this has to do with establishing Regina as evil and resented for it—is the Halloween party scene where she moves in on Aaron and Cady catches her. I think it has to do with how it was blocked or maybe the musical underscoring, I'm not sure and don't know what the solution is, but the moment felt like it was trying to be big (as it should be) but landed kind of slight and flat, and thus stalled the forward momentum of the story. Maybe it was just the energy at this particular matinee. (In the film, with the way it's edited and the way Lindsay Lohan plays it, there's a major beat change at this moment where Cady goes from playing along with the Plastics, to adamantly wanting to sabotage them. It's important and it felt like it was missing here on stage.)
The tl;dr
It's solid with a lot of things done right, but the score is currently distorting the narrative and dragging everything down.
Could be an A-/B+ show, but is currently a B-/C+.
Updated On: 11/15/17 at 01:50 PM