FANtomFollies said: "corninthesky said: "I think the show would benefit from some trims and actually broaden Mother’s POV,."
I completely agree. I think a future (non-City Center) revival needs to do some work with trimming and even finessing some of the show. 'What a Game' needs to be cut completely and I think several songs could be trimmed down like 'The night Goldman spoke...' , 'Atlantic City', 'Coalhouse Demands' and 'Henry Ford'.
I think having a very stripped back production like the one at Lincoln Center is a double edged sword. It allows all the focus to be on the performances and material, but it also leaves the flaws nowhere to hide."
The night Goldman spoke… is a really big moment for Younger Brother, not just in terms of being a showcase number but the main catalyst for his development, which helps set up the whole climax. I wouldn’t trim it.
Coalhouse Demands has never been much of a standout number as it feels like it’s less concerned with being a great number than it is in giving us exposition, setting up future developments, and building up Coalhouse’s crimes in a show where that’s mainly kept offstage and arguably too swept under the rug. It could probably be trimmed a bit, but I think what it’s doing is important even if it’s one of the weaker songs.
Henry Ford on the other hand is a fun and short song that caps off Coalhouse’s proper intro, but it does feel a bit out of place, giving Ford a weirdly glorified portrayal. Atlantic City’s also fun, but probably too big a number with too little development going on.
And yes, What a Game should be cut. It feels like they just wanted a comedic number for the darker second act, but it doesn’t gel well or add much. We already see Father’s sense of isolation in a changing world portrayed much better in other numbers.